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Psychopathic

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  She's a psychopath.

She fills her bottle
With hearts of rage,
Smiles and laughter -
It bursts in your face.

  A psychopath...

Her leaking bottle
Pouring memories,
Closing the cap -
Drowning victims.

  And you?

She is a bottle
Already bursting,
Loving your pain -
But you love her,
               Anyway.

        Congrats,
     You're in love
  With a psychopath.
I made some edits from the version in my journal.

Comment for Thought: I guess one could say that we're all crazy - right? But I feel there's a difference when you're a pain-loving bottle of leaking fuel for a firey anger. And that is a consequence to keep in mind if you always bottle your emotions. We're human and at some point we're simply going to break.
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Russianbear09's avatar
I like the ending better in this edited version. We are all crazy, yes, and bottling up emotions never helps.