ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
Deviation Actions
Literature Text
I'm on my knees, crouching at the site
The browned vines hang between my fingers,
Pouring to the ground - no longer reaching,
For it takes life to be able to yet reach.
Oh, but here are the petals, so dried up...
When was the last time they saw the sun?
The last time they were loved, just like
What the symbolically once represented.
Why did you let the roses die?
You killed beauty, murdered a life.
Or is this just the place
Where love is meant to die?
Aren't roses a common flower
To lie in the hands of the deceased?
Is that why this beauty's final rest
Was here, in this place, as well?
Is this were roses are meant to die?
Where love is a sharp object,
Like these dead vines shriveled, falling?
Is that why you did it?
Why did you kill the love?
Was it because you were afraid?
Afraid that it would come back to stab you,
And you figured that if the vines couldn't reach
You would never feel the pain...
This is where roses are meant to die.
Where vines are no longer deadly sharp.
A place where the representation love
Was killed before it could even prove
Whether or not it's harmful at all ~
The browned vines hang between my fingers,
Pouring to the ground - no longer reaching,
For it takes life to be able to yet reach.
Oh, but here are the petals, so dried up...
When was the last time they saw the sun?
The last time they were loved, just like
What the symbolically once represented.
Why did you let the roses die?
You killed beauty, murdered a life.
Or is this just the place
Where love is meant to die?
Aren't roses a common flower
To lie in the hands of the deceased?
Is that why this beauty's final rest
Was here, in this place, as well?
Is this were roses are meant to die?
Where love is a sharp object,
Like these dead vines shriveled, falling?
Is that why you did it?
Why did you kill the love?
Was it because you were afraid?
Afraid that it would come back to stab you,
And you figured that if the vines couldn't reach
You would never feel the pain...
This is where roses are meant to die.
Where vines are no longer deadly sharp.
A place where the representation love
Was killed before it could even prove
Whether or not it's harmful at all ~
Literature
No more
No more pain
No more suffering
We've had enough
It ends today
Today we fight
And earn our freedom
Or die trying
Literature
Resisting
Feeling down
Feeling lost
In a world with no mercy
I survive
Day after day
Until the end
The day I die
And then maybe
I'll find some peace
Literature
beautiful broken things must stick together
because she is a broken pretty thing,
and he is the little boy who grew up
mending
treating,
loving
broken things.
Suggested Collections
Featured in Groups
I walked into one of the rooms in the house that's never used, and on the table in there were the roses my father gave me mother on Valentine's Day... They're long gone, dead - just like my parents' love anyways. Unless love is supposed to be yelling and insults behind each other's backs while trying to take any chance to be away from each other... *sigh*
To see the original roses (and the image I manipulated for the poem) as well as the poetry design:
To see the original roses (and the image I manipulated for the poem) as well as the poetry design:
© 2014 - 2024 LMW-The-Poet
Comments13
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Well written, moving, symbolic, sad... I don't trust myself enough to write a critique, but this is very good. Thank you for sharing it with us.