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This Is Judgement

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Be proud of who you are
And don't let anyone
Tell you other wise

Accept respect with a smile,
And don't listen to the hatred -

Let neither get to your head.

There is no true respect
In acceptance and hatred,
To be pointing out who you are
In any positive or negative way
Is still treating you
Like the outcast
You know you aren't.

We are all human.

Some humans were born
Genetically not who they are.

Some humans were born
Genetically the same as who
They feel they are.

Some humans are girls
Who love girls,
Some humans are girls
Who love boys.

Some humans are boys
Who love girls,
Some humans are boys
Who love boys.

Judging is not disrespect,
Judging is not noticing.

Judging id picking out outcasts
In a world where we are all human.
Whether people accept something or not, it shouldn't matter. Treat people like they're human. Be prideful of who you are, but that doesn't mean you're any more or any less than anyone else. Some of those who don't accept certain people can at times be disrespectful - judgement. Some of those who are accepting of certain people can tend to put those people above the disrespectful ones.

People should not be considered above or below another. I don't care if you accept who they are or not. There should be no disrespect, and there should be no special treatment.

I wrote a piece as a sort of back story to this, what inspired this. sta.sh/0saqflm5hwe
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it's nice and easy to understand
I loved the way you use repetitive words like a children's game. Perfect on that way cuz it's aproppiated to all ppl.

(This poem) That made me feel that you were truly confident when you were writing this.
If we read carefully, your words, phrases, inspires to have faith in ourselves, in aceptacion.

You wrote about the both sides of the coin, showing what's real, and what's a human excuse to fight.

I don't know if it's only me, but instead of just a cute poem, you wanted to expose an old true. A reality that we're living everyday in our world.