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Tarnished Knights

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Knights dressed in tarnished bits of armor
Imaged toegther from past's ideas of destructive
Love once casting its curse upon many who now
Loathe the ever idea of the simplicity that nearly
Eternally took each of their hearts from ever
Remaining around long enough to fight battles for
Lives in which it is not too late, but that danger has
Opened its way to the minds of those who still
Remain in this everlasting battle to veer from possible
Death - fighting until the last armor rusts to its fall.
1 more stand - the battle that will tell the tales for years.
2 types of scars being the motivation; mental & physical.
3 chances out in the field in a final fight to the death.
For :iconkillerlord123:. I thought of the word "knight" and began thinking medieval and how life is a battle and so on.

April 30th, 2014 -- 7:47 P.M.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This poem is probably one of the best i have read here in deviantart. The passion for the life that it radiates it's significant. The meaning behind it so More than just a few simple words strike for the life fight and live till the end don't give up even if your enemies have stolen your love and your smile. Really really great poem love it. Next thing the language is very inspiring and strong also it has a great impact on the reader because it passes many messages than one. It is very realistic and the originality of it is spot on. Good job