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Suicidal Fantasy

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Tell me what it's like
For a blade
To cross against your neck

It's chilling,
Your nerves almost stop
And your thoughts release,
Prepared.


Explain to me
How it felt when you stepped
Off the stool

Adrenaline.
It coursed all throughout
In that beautiful agony
I always dreamed for


Show me what it's like
To die,
But never be dead

When you open your eyes,
Your respect for life grows -
The will to live never leaves -
But neither does the want to not.
Again, nothing to worry about. Vent poetry. I've just been thinking lately, and some thoughts have been inspiring poetry. I might explain after a few days, or maybe I'll just let the other pieces I'm writing speak...
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KatieTheBae's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I absolutely loved your poem. Something about it was very intriguing. Very breath taking in my view. You put much detail in everything you write. I noticed something about this one specifically. I don't know exactly what, but there is something about it. Everything you produce in your writing, from what I can tell, comes from your heart. You put a lot of compassion into it, as well as putting your thoughts and ideas into a few words. I surely am going to "favorite" this. You did outstanding work and I'd love to see more. Once more- Very unique writings.

Sincerely,
Katie