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Posession

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Literature Text

Speaker of thoughts
Lying in the shadows

Whilst rose in my hand
A blade of dripping blood
From a lover's body

This dagger rises to dry
Between the bones of my ribs

Laugh he shall, it booms
My best friend the shadow
Rising up behind our backs
I've been watching too many ghost shows... I saw one that talked about "shadow people" and now just watched one where a possessed man killed his girlfriend and then himself. So, I mixed the ideas.

Thoughts on the style of the language? It feels less prose-ish.

And for those who comment, I'm curious: Is anyone else interested in the paranormal? I've had a couple of iffy experiences - I believe that spirits can exist, but I'd rather be skeptical than jump to belief.
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Russianbear09's avatar
I'd like to think I'm skeptical, it leaves it open to thoughts and opinions. I have thought that mate the paranormal can be real, but for some it is just psychological. Perhaps they just imagine these things when there is no true logical explanation, or certain memories could create illusions. At the same time though, what can not be proved can not e disproved. It is left up to people's own opinions and thoughts on the subject, and everyone is different.