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Conflict Burns These Saline Eyes

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Cry your saline tears,
Watch them drip -
Falling against your
Array of sliced skin;

Oh, I hope that
The salt burns &
The water heals:

Please, learn the lesson -
But don't get hurt...
I've developed a recent writing-topic obsession... Saline (salt-water) solution mixed the bloody cuts. (The salt burns and is carried through the blood more easily because it's liquid). I'm in the process of writing a murder stpry based on the idea, and wrote a few short poems using saline and blood... I'll share them soon (maybe, hopefully). But for now: you get a metaphor relating my little idea to the conflict a person feels about another person self-harming...
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave's avatar
It feels really relatable... The ghosts of my past love this poem...